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I am a husband and a father and writing is my passion. Check out www.kennethwbarber.com for up to date info about me and to purchase copies of my work.

To Muse or Not To Muse

Hello Barber-ians and welcome!

I have had several individuals, some of whom I work with (the dreaded DAY JOB!! AHHHH!!!!), some of whom just know me, ask me THE QUESTION. Where do you get your ideas? they ask.

I will attempt here to make some satisfactory answer. The short answer is simple enough. I haven't the foggiest notion.A slightly more elucidated response might be everywhere...and nowhere.

It seems to me that readers expect some elaborate and mystical ritual process by which a writer receives inspiration. Perhaps a Muse is involved. Perhaps a pack of wild polar bears. But the truth I think, at least for me, is terribly more mundane than that. I just simply don't know. Some days I'm struck with the overwhelming desire to begin a new story, other days I'm not.

And anything can set off the inspiration. A cicada singing. The sound of a lawnmower. The way a beam of light reflects off the surface of a plastic lightsaber decorating the middle of the living room floor. Or it can seemingly come from nowhere at all. Poof, there it is.

To be honest, for most of my life I've had alternate versions of reality playing out in my head. Infinite 'what if' versions of the world. I believe that most (read all) of us talk to ourselves, at least from time to time. The difference is that, when you're a writer, you answer yourself and share those conversations with the world.

I hope this has helped to illuminate somewhat the process involved in how I decide to write. I know it seems a bit vague, but know that this is not from some self important desire to appear mysterious  so much as from a fairly extensive lack of understanding on my own behalf as to where these things come from.

Thanks for stopping by Barber-ians and, as always, keep writing!

Submission Update

Hello Barber-ians and thanks for stopping by again!
Just a quick note to let you know my status. I have just returned from dropping my first official materials submission at the request of a literary agent in the mail. Now comes the waiting. GRRRRRR! It's tough to be patient, but hopefully, with luck and the good mood of the requesting agent, I will soon be submitting my full manuscript for his review. Keep good thoughts for me. Have a great day and, as always, keep writing!

Manuscript Request!

Welcome Barber-ians,

Great News! After making my own plans for the e-release of my novel The Harrowing on Amazon Kindle 90 Day exclusive on June 1, I received a partial manuscript request from a literary agent. Persistence pays off. Never give up.

After multiple submissions (and rejections) I began to alter my query. I updated it. I made it better. I asked for help from my wife on concisely cutting my book down to query size. She did an excellent job. Sometimes as writers it's difficult for us to see what is actually necessary for the readers understanding and what is detail to expand on said understanding. We think it's all necessary because we wrote it. It was one of these query revisions that finally resulted in a partial manuscript request.

Now comes more work. I have to follow the materials request guidelines laid out on the agents website. Not a big deal, just time consuming as most of what he wants is not the format I originally used. I have to make sure I have the correct margins, headers, page numbering, line spacing, font, double spacing after every sentence end, etc.

Lesson learned. Most agents will want double line spacing, double spacing after sentences, 1" margins all around. These are good basic formatting practices to use when you begin writing, then you don't have to go back and fix it when you get a request.

I am preparing my submission materials this weekend with plans to have it in the mail by Monday or Tuesday. I have completed all of the specified formatting requests and am now attempting to boil a 30 chapter novel down into a 5 page synopsis. Not easy, Especially for the writer. On my first attempt I had already written 5 pages of synopsis on the first 6 chapters. My wife, again, is coming to my rescue and bringing her invaluable insights as a reader to help me determine what is strictly necessary detail for the synopsis.

I'll keep you all apprised of changes to my publication status, but for now keep your eyes out for The Harrowing on Kindle as of June 1. And be sure to visit my website at http://www.kennethwbarber.com/.

Thanks and keep writing (and reading The Harrowing, of course). Until next time Barber-ians!


Writer's Group


Get to know each other. Share a piece of our work and our goals.

  • 1470 Lafayette Pkwy, Suite 200, LaGrangeGA (edit map)
  • This is our inaugural meeting! At this meeting the plan is to spend time getting to know one another. Our names, ideas and goals. What we do for fun, family and any history we feel comfortable sharing. For The Love Of Words is more than just a group of casual accomplices, we're friends. Bring any of your work that you might want to share and get feedback on and please be patient as we let everyone have their turn.

Hey Kenneth, get the conversation started!

    Daily Writing Tip


    34 Writing Tips That Will Make You a Better Writer

    writingtipstobecomeabetterwriter.jpgA couple of weeks ago we asked our readers to share their writing tips. The response was far beyond the initial expectations, and the quality of the tips included was amazing. Thanks for everyone who contributed.
    Now, without further delay, the 34 writing tips that will make you a better writer!
    1. Daniel
    Pay attention to punctuation, especially to the correct use of commas and periods. These two punctuation marks regulate the flow of your thoughts, and they can make your text confusing even if the words are clear.
    2. Thomas
    Participate in NaNoWriMo, which challenges you to write a 50,000 word novel in a month. I noticed that my writing has definitely improved over the course of the book — and it’s not even finished yet.
    3. Bill Harper
    Try not to edit while you’re creating your first draft. Creating and editing are two separate processes using different sides of the brain, and if you try doing both at once you’ll lose. Make a deal with your internal editor that it will get the chance to rip your piece to shreds; it will just need to wait some time.
    A really nice trick is to switch off your monitor when you’re typing. You can’t edit what you can’t see.
    4. Jacinta 
    In a sentence: write daily for 30 minutes minimum! It’s easy to notice the difference in a short time. Suddenly, ideas come to you and you think of other things to write. You experiment with styles and voices and words and the language becomes more familiar…
    5. Ane Mulligan 
    Learn the rules of good writing… then learn when and how to break them.
    6. Pete Bollini
    I sometimes write out 8 to 10 pages from the book of my favorite writer… in longhand. This helps me to get started and swing into the style I wish to write in.
    7. Nilima Bhadbhade 
    Be a good reader first.
    8. Douglas Davis
    While spell-checking programs serve as a good tool, they should not be relied
    upon to detect all mistakes. Regardless of the length of the article, always read and review what you have written.
    9. Kukusha
    Learn to take criticism and seek it out at every opportunity. Don’t get upset even if you think the criticism is harsh, don’t be offended even if you think it’s wrong, and always thank those who take the time to offer it.
    10. John England 
    Right click on a word to use the thesaurus. Do it again on the new word and make the best use of your vocabulary.
    11. Lillie Ammann
    After editing the work on screen or in print, I like to read the text aloud. Awkward sentences and errors that slipped through earlier edits show up readily when reading out loud.
    12. H Devaraja Rao
    Avoid wordiness. Professor Strunk put it well: “a sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.”
    13. David
    Write as if you’re on deadline and have 500 words to make your point. Then do it again. And again.
    14. Yvette
    Sometimes I type in a large font to have the words and sentences bold before me.
    Sometimes, in the middle of a document I will start a new topic on a fresh sheet to have that clean feeling. Then, I’ll cut and insert it into the larger document.
    I wait until my paper is done before I examine my word usage and vocabulary choices. (And reading this column it has reminded me that no two words are ever exactly alike.) So at the end, I take time to examine my choice of words. I have a lot of fun selecting the exact words to pinpoint my thoughts or points.
    15. Amit Goyal
    To be a good writer is to start writing everyday. As Mark Twain said, “the secret of getting ahead is getting started.”
    Try using new words. i.e avoid repeating words. this way we learn the usage of different words.
    Do edit your previous articles.
    Start with small paragraphs like writing an article for a Newspaper, and proceed from there.
    16. John Dodds 
    Remove as many adjectives as possible. Read Jack Finney’s tale, Cousin Len’s Wonderful Adjective Cellar for a fantastical tale about how a hack becomes a successful author with the help of a magical salt cellar that removes adjectives from his work.
    17. John Ireland
    I set my writing aside and edit a day or two later with the aim of making it terse. It has trained me to be more conscious of brevity when writing for immediate distribution.
    18. Jai 
    Try to write in simple way. Express your views with most appropriate words.
    19. Mark 
    Read great writers for inspiration. If you read them enough, their excellent writing style will rub off onto your dazzling blog.
    YOU ARE what you read (and write!).
    20. Caroline
    I watch my action tense and wordiness in sentences when I am writing my technical diddley.
    For example, in a sentence where you say …”you will have to…” I replace it with “…you must…”, or “Click on the Go button to…” can be replaced with “Click Go to…”.
    Think of words such as “enables”, instead of “allows you to” or “helps you to”.
    If one word will work where three are, replace it! I always find these, where I slip into conversational as I am writing quickly, then go back and purge, purge, purge.
    21. Akhil Tandulwadikar
    Don’t shy away from adopting the good habits that other writers use.
    Do not worry about the length of the article as long as it conveys the point. Of course, the fewer words you use, the better.
    Start the article with a short sentence, not more than 8 words.
    22. Julie Martinenza
    Instead of adding tags (he said/she said) to every bit of dialogue, learn to identify the speaker by showing him/her in action. Example: “Pass that sweet-smelling turkey this way.” With knife in one hand and fork in the other, Sam looked eager to pounce.
    23. Aaron Stroud 
    Write often and to completion by following a realistic writing schedule.
    24. Joanna Young
    One that works for me every time is to focus on the positive intention behind my writing. What is it that I want to communicate, express, convey? By focusing on that, by getting into the state that I’m trying to express, I find that I stop worrying about the words – just let them tumble out of their own accord.
    It’s a great strategy for beating writer’s block, or overcoming anxiety about a particular piece of writing, whether that’s composing a formal business letter, writing a piece from the heart, or guest blogging somewhere ‘big’…
    25. Shelley Rodrigo
    Use others writer’s sentences and paragraphs as models and then emulate the syntactic structure with your own content. I’ve learned more about grammar and punctuation that way.
    26. Sylvia
    Avoid long sentences.
    27. Mike Feeney 
    Learn the difference between me, myself and I. For example: “Contact Bob or myself if you have any questions.” I hear this very often!
    28. Richard Scott 
    When doing a long project, a novel, for instance, shut off your internal editor and just write.
    Think of your first draft as a complex outline waiting to be expanded upon, and let the words flow.
    29. David
    Careful with unnecessary expressions. “At this point in time” came along during the Nixon congressional hearings. Too bad it didn’t go out with him. What about “on a daily basis?”
    30. E. I. Sanchez 
    For large documents, I use Word’s Speech feature to have the computer read the article back. This allows me to catch errors I have missed – especially missing words or words that ’sort of sound the same’ but are spelled differently (e.g. Front me instead of ‘From me’).
    31. Cat
    Either read the book “Writing Tools 50 Strategies for Every Writer”, by Roy Peter Clark, or read the Fifty Writing Tools: Quick List on his blog. Then join a writing group, or hire a writing coach.
    32. Suemagoo 
    Write the first draft spontaneously. Switch off your internal editor until it is time to review your first draft.
    33. Lydia
    If you’re writing fiction, it’s a great idea to have a plot. It will coordinate your thoughts and add consistency to the text.
    34. Pedro
    Edit your older articles and pieces. You will notice that great part of it will be crap, and it will allow you to refine your style and avoid mistakes that you used to make.

    Daily Writing Tip


    34 Writing Tips That Will Make You a Better Writer

    writingtipstobecomeabetterwriter.jpgA couple of weeks ago we asked our readers to share their writing tips. The response was far beyond the initial expectations, and the quality of the tips included was amazing. Thanks for everyone who contributed.
    Now, without further delay, the 34 writing tips that will make you a better writer!
    1. Daniel
    Pay attention to punctuation, especially to the correct use of commas and periods. These two punctuation marks regulate the flow of your thoughts, and they can make your text confusing even if the words are clear.
    2. Thomas
    Participate in NaNoWriMo, which challenges you to write a 50,000 word novel in a month. I noticed that my writing has definitely improved over the course of the book — and it’s not even finished yet.
    3. Bill Harper
    Try not to edit while you’re creating your first draft. Creating and editing are two separate processes using different sides of the brain, and if you try doing both at once you’ll lose. Make a deal with your internal editor that it will get the chance to rip your piece to shreds; it will just need to wait some time.
    A really nice trick is to switch off your monitor when you’re typing. You can’t edit what you can’t see.
    4. Jacinta 
    In a sentence: write daily for 30 minutes minimum! It’s easy to notice the difference in a short time. Suddenly, ideas come to you and you think of other things to write. You experiment with styles and voices and words and the language becomes more familiar…
    5. Ane Mulligan 
    Learn the rules of good writing… then learn when and how to break them.
    6. Pete Bollini
    I sometimes write out 8 to 10 pages from the book of my favorite writer… in longhand. This helps me to get started and swing into the style I wish to write in.
    7. Nilima Bhadbhade 
    Be a good reader first.
    8. Douglas Davis
    While spell-checking programs serve as a good tool, they should not be relied
    upon to detect all mistakes. Regardless of the length of the article, always read and review what you have written.
    9. Kukusha
    Learn to take criticism and seek it out at every opportunity. Don’t get upset even if you think the criticism is harsh, don’t be offended even if you think it’s wrong, and always thank those who take the time to offer it.
    10. John England 
    Right click on a word to use the thesaurus. Do it again on the new word and make the best use of your vocabulary.
    11. Lillie Ammann
    After editing the work on screen or in print, I like to read the text aloud. Awkward sentences and errors that slipped through earlier edits show up readily when reading out loud.
    12. H Devaraja Rao
    Avoid wordiness. Professor Strunk put it well: “a sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.”
    13. David
    Write as if you’re on deadline and have 500 words to make your point. Then do it again. And again.
    14. Yvette
    Sometimes I type in a large font to have the words and sentences bold before me.
    Sometimes, in the middle of a document I will start a new topic on a fresh sheet to have that clean feeling. Then, I’ll cut and insert it into the larger document.
    I wait until my paper is done before I examine my word usage and vocabulary choices. (And reading this column it has reminded me that no two words are ever exactly alike.) So at the end, I take time to examine my choice of words. I have a lot of fun selecting the exact words to pinpoint my thoughts or points.
    15. Amit Goyal
    To be a good writer is to start writing everyday. As Mark Twain said, “the secret of getting ahead is getting started.”
    Try using new words. i.e avoid repeating words. this way we learn the usage of different words.
    Do edit your previous articles.
    Start with small paragraphs like writing an article for a Newspaper, and proceed from there.
    16. John Dodds 
    Remove as many adjectives as possible. Read Jack Finney’s tale, Cousin Len’s Wonderful Adjective Cellar for a fantastical tale about how a hack becomes a successful author with the help of a magical salt cellar that removes adjectives from his work.
    17. John Ireland
    I set my writing aside and edit a day or two later with the aim of making it terse. It has trained me to be more conscious of brevity when writing for immediate distribution.
    18. Jai 
    Try to write in simple way. Express your views with most appropriate words.
    19. Mark 
    Read great writers for inspiration. If you read them enough, their excellent writing style will rub off onto your dazzling blog.
    YOU ARE what you read (and write!).
    20. Caroline
    I watch my action tense and wordiness in sentences when I am writing my technical diddley.
    For example, in a sentence where you say …”you will have to…” I replace it with “…you must…”, or “Click on the Go button to…” can be replaced with “Click Go to…”.
    Think of words such as “enables”, instead of “allows you to” or “helps you to”.
    If one word will work where three are, replace it! I always find these, where I slip into conversational as I am writing quickly, then go back and purge, purge, purge.
    21. Akhil Tandulwadikar
    Don’t shy away from adopting the good habits that other writers use.
    Do not worry about the length of the article as long as it conveys the point. Of course, the fewer words you use, the better.
    Start the article with a short sentence, not more than 8 words.
    22. Julie Martinenza
    Instead of adding tags (he said/she said) to every bit of dialogue, learn to identify the speaker by showing him/her in action. Example: “Pass that sweet-smelling turkey this way.” With knife in one hand and fork in the other, Sam looked eager to pounce.
    23. Aaron Stroud 
    Write often and to completion by following a realistic writing schedule.
    24. Joanna Young
    One that works for me every time is to focus on the positive intention behind my writing. What is it that I want to communicate, express, convey? By focusing on that, by getting into the state that I’m trying to express, I find that I stop worrying about the words – just let them tumble out of their own accord.
    It’s a great strategy for beating writer’s block, or overcoming anxiety about a particular piece of writing, whether that’s composing a formal business letter, writing a piece from the heart, or guest blogging somewhere ‘big’…
    25. Shelley Rodrigo
    Use others writer’s sentences and paragraphs as models and then emulate the syntactic structure with your own content. I’ve learned more about grammar and punctuation that way.
    26. Sylvia
    Avoid long sentences.
    27. Mike Feeney 
    Learn the difference between me, myself and I. For example: “Contact Bob or myself if you have any questions.” I hear this very often!
    28. Richard Scott 
    When doing a long project, a novel, for instance, shut off your internal editor and just write.
    Think of your first draft as a complex outline waiting to be expanded upon, and let the words flow.
    29. David
    Careful with unnecessary expressions. “At this point in time” came along during the Nixon congressional hearings. Too bad it didn’t go out with him. What about “on a daily basis?”
    30. E. I. Sanchez 
    For large documents, I use Word’s Speech feature to have the computer read the article back. This allows me to catch errors I have missed – especially missing words or words that ’sort of sound the same’ but are spelled differently (e.g. Front me instead of ‘From me’).
    31. Cat
    Either read the book “Writing Tools 50 Strategies for Every Writer”, by Roy Peter Clark, or read the Fifty Writing Tools: Quick List on his blog. Then join a writing group, or hire a writing coach.
    32. Suemagoo 
    Write the first draft spontaneously. Switch off your internal editor until it is time to review your first draft.
    33. Lydia
    If you’re writing fiction, it’s a great idea to have a plot. It will coordinate your thoughts and add consistency to the text.
    34. Pedro
    Edit your older articles and pieces. You will notice that great part of it will be crap, and it will allow you to refine your style and avoid mistakes that you used to make.

    Book Review: NOS4A2


    Premium Article Book review: ‘NOS4A2’ by Joe Hill

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    It’s ironic that NOS4A2, the book that will in all likelihood be Joe Hill’s breakthrough to superstardom, is also the first book in which he’s gone all-in with acknowledging his way-above-average literary genes.
    Hill, the 40-year-old son of author Stephen King, uses a shortened version of his middle name (Hillstrom) and for several years didn’t tell anyone his identity as the progeny of one of the world’s best-selling authors. He “came out” in 2007 after folks started figuring it out.
    By then, Hill had already received awards for his short stories and comics and had won the prestigious Bram Stoker Award for his collection, 20th Century Ghosts. Two novels followed, Heart-Shaped Box in 2007 (that one made it to The New York Times’ best-seller list) and Horns in 2010. While those works contained elements of horror and fantasy, they were heavily symbolic examples of those genres, mostly bereft of the down-and-dirty terror of most of King’s work.
    Not so with NOS4A2, whose vampire-referencing title (just keep saying it and you’ll figure it out) is the vanity license plate of its villain, Charles Talent Manx.
    A ghastly, not-quite-human specter with a vile sense of humor, Manx trolls for children in his 1938 Rolls-Royce Wraith and then spirits them away to an “amusement park” called Christmasland, where every day is Christmas and unhappy thinking is simply not tolerated. It’s an overly decorated holiday phantasm, complete with evil elves, teeth dripping blood and gore, and everything twisty and convoluted, as though seen in a funhouse mirror: Christmas à la Salvador Dalí.
    It’s all well and good if you don’t mind being kidnapped, leaving all your loved ones behind and living in the gruesome construct of Manx’s mind, which somehow becomes physically manifest. Oh, and growing rows of tiny hooks where your teeth used to be. Manx is a vampire, all right, but he feeds on souls rather than blood.
    Hill’s protagonist, Victoria “Brat” McQueen, like Manx, has a particular talent, hers seemingly benign: She can find things. Aboard her trusty Raleigh Tuff Burner bicycle, she can cross the Shorter Way Bridge near her home (even after the bridge has long been demolished) and be transported to the land of the lost. Her mother’s bracelet? She lands at the diner where it was left behind. Her innocence? Manx’s home, the Sleigh House, where he nearly killed her as a teenager.
    As Vic grows up, she follows a path of addiction, rehab and the psych ward, finally convincing herself that her Tuff Burner journeys and Manx were all a product of her sick imagination. Then Manx reappears and kidnaps Vic’s son, and she heads back onto the Shorter Way in a reckless frenzy.
    Not only does Hill acknowledge his dad’s influence here, he gleefully drops little Easter eggs throughout for his father’s fans. You’ll find a reference to Pennywise, the horrific clown from It, among others, and that Wraith can trace its lineage right back to the nasty Plymouth in King’s Christine. Yet Hill is very much his own writer, at least as talented as King and a smidge more literary in his approach. He takes his time building to the epic horror that awaits in the book’s final third (and by then, trust me, you won’t be going to sleep anytime soon).
    As an ardent King fan, I’ve long fretted about what I’ll do for my horror fix when he stops writing. Now I’m not worried at all — we’ve found King’s perfect successor in Hill. In 20 or 30 years, when people talk about Stephen King, for many younger horror fans it’ll be as “oh, yeah, that writer who was Joe Hill’s father.”
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    @joytipping.
    NOS4A2
    Joe Hill
    (William Morrow, $28.99)