Hello Barber-ians and welcome!
I have had several individuals, some of whom I work with (the dreaded DAY JOB!! AHHHH!!!!), some of whom just know me, ask me THE QUESTION. Where do you get your ideas? they ask.
I will attempt here to make some satisfactory answer. The short answer is simple enough. I haven't the foggiest notion.A slightly more elucidated response might be everywhere...and nowhere.
It seems to me that readers expect some elaborate and mystical ritual process by which a writer receives inspiration. Perhaps a Muse is involved. Perhaps a pack of wild polar bears. But the truth I think, at least for me, is terribly more mundane than that. I just simply don't know. Some days I'm struck with the overwhelming desire to begin a new story, other days I'm not.
And anything can set off the inspiration. A cicada singing. The sound of a lawnmower. The way a beam of light reflects off the surface of a plastic lightsaber decorating the middle of the living room floor. Or it can seemingly come from nowhere at all. Poof, there it is.
To be honest, for most of my life I've had alternate versions of reality playing out in my head. Infinite 'what if' versions of the world. I believe that most (read all) of us talk to ourselves, at least from time to time. The difference is that, when you're a writer, you answer yourself and share those conversations with the world.
I hope this has helped to illuminate somewhat the process involved in how I decide to write. I know it seems a bit vague, but know that this is not from some self important desire to appear mysterious so much as from a fairly extensive lack of understanding on my own behalf as to where these things come from.
Thanks for stopping by Barber-ians and, as always, keep writing!
A little about me
- Kenneth W. Barber
- I am a husband and a father and writing is my passion. Check out www.kennethwbarber.com for up to date info about me and to purchase copies of my work.
Hello Barber-ians and thanks for stopping by again!
Just a quick note to let you know my status. I have just returned from dropping my first official materials submission at the request of a literary agent in the mail. Now comes the waiting. GRRRRRR! It's tough to be patient, but hopefully, with luck and the good mood of the requesting agent, I will soon be submitting my full manuscript for his review. Keep good thoughts for me. Have a great day and, as always, keep writing!
Welcome Barber-ians,
Great News! After making my own plans for the e-release of my novel The Harrowing on Amazon Kindle 90 Day exclusive on June 1, I received a partial manuscript request from a literary agent. Persistence pays off. Never give up.
After multiple submissions (and rejections) I began to alter my query. I updated it. I made it better. I asked for help from my wife on concisely cutting my book down to query size. She did an excellent job. Sometimes as writers it's difficult for us to see what is actually necessary for the readers understanding and what is detail to expand on said understanding. We think it's all necessary because we wrote it. It was one of these query revisions that finally resulted in a partial manuscript request.
Now comes more work. I have to follow the materials request guidelines laid out on the agents website. Not a big deal, just time consuming as most of what he wants is not the format I originally used. I have to make sure I have the correct margins, headers, page numbering, line spacing, font, double spacing after every sentence end, etc.
Lesson learned. Most agents will want double line spacing, double spacing after sentences, 1" margins all around. These are good basic formatting practices to use when you begin writing, then you don't have to go back and fix it when you get a request.
I am preparing my submission materials this weekend with plans to have it in the mail by Monday or Tuesday. I have completed all of the specified formatting requests and am now attempting to boil a 30 chapter novel down into a 5 page synopsis. Not easy, Especially for the writer. On my first attempt I had already written 5 pages of synopsis on the first 6 chapters. My wife, again, is coming to my rescue and bringing her invaluable insights as a reader to help me determine what is strictly necessary detail for the synopsis.
I'll keep you all apprised of changes to my publication status, but for now keep your eyes out for The Harrowing on Kindle as of June 1. And be sure to visit my website at http://www.kennethwbarber.com/.
Thanks and keep writing (and reading The Harrowing, of course). Until next time Barber-ians!
Get to know each other. Share a piece of our work and our goals.
- This is our inaugural meeting! At this meeting the plan is to spend time getting to know one another. Our names, ideas and goals. What we do for fun, family and any history we feel comfortable sharing. For The Love Of Words is more than just a group of casual accomplices, we're friends. Bring any of your work that you might want to share and get feedback on and please be patient as we let everyone have their turn.
34 Writing Tips That Will Make You a Better Writer
Pay attention to punctuation, especially to the correct use of commas and periods. These two punctuation marks regulate the flow of your thoughts, and they can make your text confusing even if the words are clear.
Participate in NaNoWriMo, which challenges you to write a 50,000 word novel in a month. I noticed that my writing has definitely improved over the course of the book — and it’s not even finished yet.
Try not to edit while you’re creating your first draft. Creating and editing are two separate processes using different sides of the brain, and if you try doing both at once you’ll lose. Make a deal with your internal editor that it will get the chance to rip your piece to shreds; it will just need to wait some time.
In a sentence: write daily for 30 minutes minimum! It’s easy to notice the difference in a short time. Suddenly, ideas come to you and you think of other things to write. You experiment with styles and voices and words and the language becomes more familiar…
Learn the rules of good writing… then learn when and how to break them.
I sometimes write out 8 to 10 pages from the book of my favorite writer… in longhand. This helps me to get started and swing into the style I wish to write in.
Be a good reader first.
While spell-checking programs serve as a good tool, they should not be relied
upon to detect all mistakes. Regardless of the length of the article, always read and review what you have written.
Learn to take criticism and seek it out at every opportunity. Don’t get upset even if you think the criticism is harsh, don’t be offended even if you think it’s wrong, and always thank those who take the time to offer it.
Right click on a word to use the thesaurus. Do it again on the new word and make the best use of your vocabulary.
After editing the work on screen or in print, I like to read the text aloud. Awkward sentences and errors that slipped through earlier edits show up readily when reading out loud.
Avoid wordiness. Professor Strunk put it well: “a sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.”
Write as if you’re on deadline and have 500 words to make your point. Then do it again. And again.
Sometimes I type in a large font to have the words and sentences bold before me.
To be a good writer is to start writing everyday. As Mark Twain said, “the secret of getting ahead is getting started.”
Do edit your previous articles.
Remove as many adjectives as possible. Read Jack Finney’s tale, Cousin Len’s Wonderful Adjective Cellar for a fantastical tale about how a hack becomes a successful author with the help of a magical salt cellar that removes adjectives from his work.
I set my writing aside and edit a day or two later with the aim of making it terse. It has trained me to be more conscious of brevity when writing for immediate distribution.
Try to write in simple way. Express your views with most appropriate words.
Read great writers for inspiration. If you read them enough, their excellent writing style will rub off onto your dazzling blog.
I watch my action tense and wordiness in sentences when I am writing my technical diddley.
Don’t shy away from adopting the good habits that other writers use.
Instead of adding tags (he said/she said) to every bit of dialogue, learn to identify the speaker by showing him/her in action. Example: “Pass that sweet-smelling turkey this way.” With knife in one hand and fork in the other, Sam looked eager to pounce.
Write often and to completion by following a realistic writing schedule.
One that works for me every time is to focus on the positive intention behind my writing. What is it that I want to communicate, express, convey? By focusing on that, by getting into the state that I’m trying to express, I find that I stop worrying about the words – just let them tumble out of their own accord.
Use others writer’s sentences and paragraphs as models and then emulate the syntactic structure with your own content. I’ve learned more about grammar and punctuation that way.
Avoid long sentences.
Learn the difference between me, myself and I. For example: “Contact Bob or myself if you have any questions.” I hear this very often!
When doing a long project, a novel, for instance, shut off your internal editor and just write.
Careful with unnecessary expressions. “At this point in time” came along during the Nixon congressional hearings. Too bad it didn’t go out with him. What about “on a daily basis?”
For large documents, I use Word’s Speech feature to have the computer read the article back. This allows me to catch errors I have missed – especially missing words or words that ’sort of sound the same’ but are spelled differently (e.g. Front me instead of ‘From me’).
Either read the book “Writing Tools 50 Strategies for Every Writer”, by Roy Peter Clark, or read the Fifty Writing Tools: Quick List on his blog. Then join a writing group, or hire a writing coach.
Write the first draft spontaneously. Switch off your internal editor until it is time to review your first draft.
If you’re writing fiction, it’s a great idea to have a plot. It will coordinate your thoughts and add consistency to the text.
Edit your older articles and pieces. You will notice that great part of it will be crap, and it will allow you to refine your style and avoid mistakes that you used to make.
34 Writing Tips That Will Make You a Better Writer
Pay attention to punctuation, especially to the correct use of commas and periods. These two punctuation marks regulate the flow of your thoughts, and they can make your text confusing even if the words are clear.
Participate in NaNoWriMo, which challenges you to write a 50,000 word novel in a month. I noticed that my writing has definitely improved over the course of the book — and it’s not even finished yet.
Try not to edit while you’re creating your first draft. Creating and editing are two separate processes using different sides of the brain, and if you try doing both at once you’ll lose. Make a deal with your internal editor that it will get the chance to rip your piece to shreds; it will just need to wait some time.
In a sentence: write daily for 30 minutes minimum! It’s easy to notice the difference in a short time. Suddenly, ideas come to you and you think of other things to write. You experiment with styles and voices and words and the language becomes more familiar…
Learn the rules of good writing… then learn when and how to break them.
I sometimes write out 8 to 10 pages from the book of my favorite writer… in longhand. This helps me to get started and swing into the style I wish to write in.
Be a good reader first.
While spell-checking programs serve as a good tool, they should not be relied
upon to detect all mistakes. Regardless of the length of the article, always read and review what you have written.
Learn to take criticism and seek it out at every opportunity. Don’t get upset even if you think the criticism is harsh, don’t be offended even if you think it’s wrong, and always thank those who take the time to offer it.
Right click on a word to use the thesaurus. Do it again on the new word and make the best use of your vocabulary.
After editing the work on screen or in print, I like to read the text aloud. Awkward sentences and errors that slipped through earlier edits show up readily when reading out loud.
Avoid wordiness. Professor Strunk put it well: “a sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.”
Write as if you’re on deadline and have 500 words to make your point. Then do it again. And again.
Sometimes I type in a large font to have the words and sentences bold before me.
To be a good writer is to start writing everyday. As Mark Twain said, “the secret of getting ahead is getting started.”
Do edit your previous articles.
Remove as many adjectives as possible. Read Jack Finney’s tale, Cousin Len’s Wonderful Adjective Cellar for a fantastical tale about how a hack becomes a successful author with the help of a magical salt cellar that removes adjectives from his work.
I set my writing aside and edit a day or two later with the aim of making it terse. It has trained me to be more conscious of brevity when writing for immediate distribution.
Try to write in simple way. Express your views with most appropriate words.
Read great writers for inspiration. If you read them enough, their excellent writing style will rub off onto your dazzling blog.
I watch my action tense and wordiness in sentences when I am writing my technical diddley.
Don’t shy away from adopting the good habits that other writers use.
Instead of adding tags (he said/she said) to every bit of dialogue, learn to identify the speaker by showing him/her in action. Example: “Pass that sweet-smelling turkey this way.” With knife in one hand and fork in the other, Sam looked eager to pounce.
Write often and to completion by following a realistic writing schedule.
One that works for me every time is to focus on the positive intention behind my writing. What is it that I want to communicate, express, convey? By focusing on that, by getting into the state that I’m trying to express, I find that I stop worrying about the words – just let them tumble out of their own accord.
Use others writer’s sentences and paragraphs as models and then emulate the syntactic structure with your own content. I’ve learned more about grammar and punctuation that way.
Avoid long sentences.
Learn the difference between me, myself and I. For example: “Contact Bob or myself if you have any questions.” I hear this very often!
When doing a long project, a novel, for instance, shut off your internal editor and just write.
Careful with unnecessary expressions. “At this point in time” came along during the Nixon congressional hearings. Too bad it didn’t go out with him. What about “on a daily basis?”
For large documents, I use Word’s Speech feature to have the computer read the article back. This allows me to catch errors I have missed – especially missing words or words that ’sort of sound the same’ but are spelled differently (e.g. Front me instead of ‘From me’).
Either read the book “Writing Tools 50 Strategies for Every Writer”, by Roy Peter Clark, or read the Fifty Writing Tools: Quick List on his blog. Then join a writing group, or hire a writing coach.
Write the first draft spontaneously. Switch off your internal editor until it is time to review your first draft.
If you’re writing fiction, it’s a great idea to have a plot. It will coordinate your thoughts and add consistency to the text.
Edit your older articles and pieces. You will notice that great part of it will be crap, and it will allow you to refine your style and avoid mistakes that you used to make.
Book review: ‘NOS4A2’ by Joe Hill
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